Sunday, October 19, 2008

When I was transferring these pieces to my computer from my notebook I realized that I have a lot to work on. I always seem to write about the same things that describe my life: stress, darkness, etc. When I was writing I found myself changing only words here and there but thinking I need to find a way to make this line and that line stronger but could not think of any way to do so.

1 comment:

Emilia said...

Yeah, I seem to find that too. More editing, and using better words.